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Syntax Issue 10
Denver Syntax
{at the concert}
  damien cowger


Ah, you shoulda seen this kid
dancing! He was really moving,
this kid. His body was so fluid,
so energetic, like his body
was a cluster of rubber tubes, filled
with piping hot water. Boiling and boiling,
trying to escape, trying
to get somewhere cooler, even
as his movements made him sweat

. I marveled in his dance more
than in the music playing. The band on stage
was just the opening act of someone greater
but on the kid’s stage he was the main draw.
He sometimes synched with the beat,
his hips gyrating and thrusting with each pulse
blasting from the speakers and sometimes he didn’t
even seem to be listening as he continued
his feral dance. He was really
something.

So then this girl walks up behind him, right?
and wants to dance with the kid, wants to shake
it like him, wants to be as free as him
and be like him. This kid’s just dancing
and feeling it and she gets close to him and he can’t
hear her over the boom boom in everyone’s ears.

She’s right there and he’s jumping now and he
turns around, his fists waving as he’s turning and
his right fist catches her square on the temple. Dah!

Right there on the dance floor.
Right there on the side of her head
. Her eyes glazed over.
Her body locked up and went rigid and she fell
down, right onto her back. He was lost in the sound before, remember?
but then his attention focused again and couldn’t think of anything
but her.

He dropped to his knees and held her, just held her
and everyone kept dancing and jumping except him and her
and me. And I didn’t know what to do.